Meenans Cove Scene - Self-critique stage

I am on to the critique stage -

looking for those nasty clones,

unmelodic lines,

overuse of value 8, balance, line, unabstract shapes...

I purchased Margaret Kessler's book "Painting Better Landscapes" and she provides great tips on what to look for. definately one of my favorite books.

I have left the details on the boats for last - not as happy about the shapes yet.

But I am close to finishing this one!